"Why" eyes?

Most long form fiction won't be seen by others until it's finished.

But here's the issue: you won't know how you can enhance your story if someone else doesn't read it.

That's why I created a new tool to make my supernatural horror novel better with high costs or technical hassles.

I talk about it in this episode of the Digital Novelist podcast.

Try the tool here:

Villain emergence

This was a long anticipated chapter when I first wrote it a few months ago. Now that I've re-written it, I'm happy to report how much more I enjoyed it.

Here you'll see the official appearance of the primary villain in the story. I love writing these scenes. You never forget a first impression, especially when so many weird things happen.

Through the eyes of one of the books most misguided characters, you'll feel the rush of anxiety as she works to make sense of the bizarre events.

Enjoy Chapter 29: